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Line-chan, April 9th, 2008, 11:54 am

::::PLEASE READ RIGHT TO LEFT:::: Miki looks weird in the third panel XD;;; This page is kinda boring... sorry! Thank you for reading ;_;

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Discussion:

Anfitere, April 9th, 2008, 1:03 pm

I think she looks cute, not weird. ;-)

PF-sama, April 9th, 2008, 2:14 pm

I think it's amusing that Suika jumps to the conclusion that Miki has a boyfriend, when she didn't even say the guy was that. Granted, it's kinda obvious that Miki may like the guy, but... >.>; Suika is silly for letting it keep getting to her. ^^;

Though I'm wondering how everyone will act on finding out that one may not need a guy, but possibly a woman! O.O

Nisey, April 9th, 2008, 7:32 pm

I think the grammar in the last panel is a little off. I think it'd be more correct English if it were something like "Am I the only one who has not gotten a boyfriend...?!"

It'd be better still to word it like "Am I the only one who does not (doesn't) have a boyfriend...?!", but that is entirely my opinion and you don't have to listen to it if you don't want to. The previous way is fine too. :D

Very promising comic btw~ *has been stalking for several weeks now* :D

Kokkoii-Matoku, April 9th, 2008, 8:08 pm

Awww this is such a cute page.

Well about the grammer Nisey, English isn't her native language. ^^- So go easy on her.

SHE'S so cuteeeee.

takashinakamura, April 9th, 2008, 8:11 pm

nice page!!! works so well!

Guest, April 10th, 2008, 1:31 am

Soooo kyote!!!! I rlly like Suika in the b/w paneeeeel<33
nya ~

luna228, April 10th, 2008, 6:58 pm

umm... no intention of being nosy but... line chan you didnt read correctly nisey said s/he tought it was more correct to say "Am I the only one who has not gotten a boyfriend...?!" than what you wrote in the page(im lazy :D)

your comics are always great! keep it up :P ....bye bye!

HimitsuDollz, April 13th, 2008, 5:42 am

Awww ;_;
I luv you comics!
They're soft, cute, adorable ;3;

Nisey, April 14th, 2008, 11:21 pm

Sorry if my grammar-naziness caused any trouble/confusion. T__T I know English isn't your native language, and so I applaud you for going for it--just thought I'd help is all. :D Nice work on the fix, it's even better than what I was thinking~!

Line-chan, April 16th, 2008, 5:47 am

To Anfitere: Thanks ;-;

To PF-sama: That's how Suika is XD But I agree with you :3 Thank you for your comment <3

To Nisey: I've fixed it now *.* Thank you!

To Kokkoii-Matoku: I'm happy that you like it <3 And it's okay~

To Takashinakamura: Yay, thanks! ;A;

To Guest: Thank you! And the black/white panel was funny to draw XD

To A-san: Thank you ;_; *hug*

To Liuna228: I'm getting a little confused right now XD But I've fixed now!

To HimitsuDollz: Awwww, thank you so much!! *kiss*

To Nisey: No no, it's okay, really! Thank you for helping me :3

selkieskin, May 2nd, 2008, 12:59 pm

'Gotten' isn't a word!! D: *is a British grammar nazi*
I think "Am I the only one who does not have a boyfriend...?" is perfectly fine. Seriously! I don't see what's wrong with it!

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